Some Afternoon Delight
I must be gone all of next week as well. I'll be back on Monday the 29th.
To experiment in the interim, though, I'll try my hand at a tiny bit of...um...er...Erotica? Maybe a good idea, maybe a bad idea.
"Mmmmm....
Your panty,
move it aside.
I'll taste you,
hurl you up to the summit;
tingling, trembling.
I'll move you across the high plateau,
urge you over the far ledge;
shuddering, laughing.
I'll lower you slowly, gently,
satiated.
I'll delight you,
in the afternoon.
To experiment in the interim, though, I'll try my hand at a tiny bit of...um...er...Erotica? Maybe a good idea, maybe a bad idea.
"Mmmmm....
Your panty,
move it aside.
I'll taste you,
hurl you up to the summit;
tingling, trembling.
I'll move you across the high plateau,
urge you over the far ledge;
shuddering, laughing.
I'll lower you slowly, gently,
satiated.
I'll delight you,
in the afternoon.
posted by Erik Ivan James | 7:26 AM
25 Comments:
Ooooh la la!
Well.
Nothing like a soothing snack in the afternoon.
--Gastro Nomical
So, this is what happens when you go away for a few days?
I expect an erotic thriller when you're back on the 29th!
Lust in the Dust!
Poking in the Poconos!
Afternoon Delights!
Something to Savor!
Superb! EXCELLENT time spent!
Thank you, Bernita.
Ivan, thanks for stopping.
Sandra, don't hold your breath. Like I said, just experimenting a bit.
Forrest, your version here ain't bad either. Any coffee left?
Hooeee. Erik, you scamp! Your wife is one lucky lady.
my pulse is racing...LOL
and I think I'm blushing
Wow, you've been busy. Where are you going with this? Keep on it.
Geeez...Jaye, I think this is the first time I've been called a "scamp". I think I like it. LOL
Anonymous,
If what you say is true, I thank you. It means I have written it reasonably well.
Thank you for the visit.
Kathie,
Thank you for visiting. I'm honored.
Holy smoking afternoons! Wow!
Elizabeth,
Thank you. I do hope this little piece of writing reads as stimulating to the reader, not insulting.
After reading Bernita's post about sex scenes in odd places, this is such a comfort I had to read the poem twice...just to calm my nerves!
Forrest,
Thanks for the return visit.
I fear I may have made a mistake here, though. It's been indicated to me that some of the ladies may be viewing this in the same light as an "obcene phone call". That certainly is not my intentions and I'll need to apologize if that turns out so.
"Obscene phone call?" Naaah. Just uptight women. Sex is natural, killing isn't. Too bad America has it backwards.
Speaking of plagiarism, wanna see the check I got in the mail for submitting this piece of "Afternoon Delight" to Rampant Erection Magazine? It's for the stunning sum of $12.50, but hell, it's a check! Thanks for writing the poem!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!
NOT!
I write my own hideously uncool porn. I just haven't posted any in a while.
C'mon home. Mini-honeymoons can only last so long at our age.
Just dropped by to say hello, sit on the railing of the gazebo and swing my feet ...
Got a bit more than I bargained for. I didn't mind a bit. ;-)
I hope you're enjoying your time away--
Forrest, I'll be back next week. Don't drink all my coffee while I'm gone. Please leave me a cup or two.
Dink,
Thank you for the vist. You are always welcome.
I'm glad you didn't mind. It is an experiment and certainly not intended to offend. Thank you.
Eric;
You are quite the cunning linguist, though I'm not sure "hurling up" and "lapping" belong in the same thought pattern though some of my dates...
well....
eek! what happened to all the nice tales about the puppy dogs?
Ah, Mindy, the nice dogs lapped it all up...
Hey, Erik, you can announce a vacation and get this many comments, man, you don't NEED to post. Just come by once a month and moderate it.
After all, I'm here for the third or fourth time, now...lusting for my James fix.
Erik, you're sweet to worry, but there's no need. I'm sorry you've caught some flak, because it's a beautiful tender and giving poem, and heaven knows there's not enough beautiful tender giving in the world in general, much less in lovemaking.
Mindy,
Just an experiment, good lady, just an experiment.
Elizabeth,
No, you are the sweet person by your understanding of it. It is meant as tender. Thank you.
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