bastard moon
Full moon, you ugly bastard!
Shining down upon me the big piss-yellow eye.
Full moon, you wart covered whore.
Dripping down upon me the shadows of your smuttiness.
You push and pull against my rationale.
You ebb away my sanity.
Full moon, you evil bitch.
Trashing my good being to dried waste.
Full moon, you brutal prick.
Ripping out my heart and crushing it back to dirt.
You stomp upon my love.
You butcher my compassion.
Full moon, you ugly bastard!
Shining down upon me the big piss-yellow eye.
Full moon, you wart covered whore.
Dripping down upon me the shadows of your smuttiness.
You push and pull against my rationale.
You ebb away my sanity.
Full moon, you evil bitch.
Trashing my good being to dried waste.
Full moon, you brutal prick.
Ripping out my heart and crushing it back to dirt.
You stomp upon my love.
You butcher my compassion.
Full moon, you ugly bastard!
posted by Erik Ivan James | 8:45 AM
13 Comments:
Extremely evocative form of howling at.
Well done, Erik!
You are multi-talented.
Thank you Bernita. Glad you enjoyed.
Not multi-talented, I just stumble and trip a lot,usually falling into a pile of.....
Sheryl Crow (after breaking up with somebody):
"Oh ballbreaking moon and ridiculing stars
The older I get, the closer you are..."
--from The Difficult Kind
Erik, you're such a talent! Here I was, thinking I'd get more erotica...
Ivan,
Who's Sheryl Crow?
Samdra,
Surprised you, huh?
Was setting on the deck in the middle of the night.
Bright moon shining on the water. Ducks and geese bobbing on the ripples.
Thought most would write something romantic, about getting laid.
Decided to do something opposite.
Erik:
Shery Crow sings pop ditties about having fun in the sun.
But she waxes lyrical when it comes to heartbreak.
What I quoted was from her earlier breakup.
The latest was with Lance Armstrong,the famous bike athlete.
She appears such a succesful songstress that she somehow scares men. "Are you strong enough to be my man?" she sings somewhere.
Pop culture seems trivial but you can't, as a writer, ignore what's going on in the other arts, pop or highbrow. Trivia, I suppose.
Erik sweety, are you having a bad day?
That was pretty amazing.
Ivan,
"She appears such a successful songstess that she scares men. 'Are you strong enough to be my man?' she sings somewhere".
I wonder, would she be woman enough to be my woman?
MissWrite,
Absolutly honored by your visit. You are always welcome here.
I like it. I feel the same way about the birds that sing in the early morning after I've battled insomnia all night. LOL!
Heh.
I would suggest, then, don't bicker.
Dicker.
hello there...just stumbled upon your blog just now. amazing poem...i shall never look at the moon in the same way again.
Thank you, Tanya. Wonderful to see you.
Meander,
Welcome and thank you. Please stop by often. My door is always open.
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