Thinking of Things
I lay without sleep, thinking of things.
A parade of storms marched by.
Lightening opened doors in black sky.
I saw visions of you, brief, vivid and clear.
Thunder rattled the walls and shook my heart.
I was lonely, I wanted you near.
Wind chorused a shrill song, its melody repeated.
I wished for your breath to mingle with mine.
Drum-rolls of rain echoed rhythms on the roof.
I longed for the feel of your fresh washed hair.
Smells of drenched earth wafted through open windows.
I yearned to disrobe you of the lace you wear.
I lay awake through last night, thinking of you.
A parade of storms marched by.
A parade of storms marched by.
Lightening opened doors in black sky.
I saw visions of you, brief, vivid and clear.
Thunder rattled the walls and shook my heart.
I was lonely, I wanted you near.
Wind chorused a shrill song, its melody repeated.
I wished for your breath to mingle with mine.
Drum-rolls of rain echoed rhythms on the roof.
I longed for the feel of your fresh washed hair.
Smells of drenched earth wafted through open windows.
I yearned to disrobe you of the lace you wear.
I lay awake through last night, thinking of you.
A parade of storms marched by.
9 Comments:
Very touching poem.
Like the parade of storms matching the parade of thoughts.
Lightning strikes!
And you'd said you couldn't write poetry!
Thank you, Bernita. I am having a bit of fun writing this stuff.
Just scribbling, Ivan, just scribbling.
Welcome. Good to see you.
good stuff, erik.
try changing line 9 to read "on the roof"
I know it might throw the metre off, but it should flow better.
just a sugggestion, that extra sylable caught me up.
Thanks, Ric. It's done.
I'm not much for poetry, but this is something I think most people can automatically connect to. Great stuff Erik.
"...this is something I think most people can automatically connect to."
Sandra, that is a wonderful compliment. Thank you!
"Smells of drenched earth wafted tgrough open windows."
This was my favorite. :-)
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